Good job, but a few things:
One, when you add in those different mouths and eyes, fuzz the edges of the pixels like you do with their regular pixles.
Two, work on your text bubbles. Just a little.
Three, If the swearing and that little bit of blood is the only reason you chose "M" as a rating, you should change it to a "T+".
Four, Change your avatar. It sucks, and when I clicked on it, I figured you'd be another Horrible spriter.
This is a good comic, and don't let that stuff keep you down!
two things; (1)fix the tails on the speech balloons, and (2) limit the cursing a little bit, like you [i]kinda[/i] did with the last page.
Either way, awesome page!
ManaBlitz at 7:21AM, Oct. 9, 2007
What program do you use to make/edit the comic?
therealtj at 6:47PM, Oct. 8, 2007
Good job, but a few things: One, when you add in those different mouths and eyes, fuzz the edges of the pixels like you do with their regular pixles. Two, work on your text bubbles. Just a little. Three, If the swearing and that little bit of blood is the only reason you chose "M" as a rating, you should change it to a "T+". Four, Change your avatar. It sucks, and when I clicked on it, I figured you'd be another Horrible spriter. This is a good comic, and don't let that stuff keep you down!
Aura Wolf at 3:56PM, Oct. 6, 2007
two things; (1)fix the tails on the speech balloons, and (2) limit the cursing a little bit, like you [i]kinda[/i] did with the last page. Either way, awesome page!
laserlemon at 2:38PM, Oct. 6, 2007
UNI-BEAM GO!
ManaBlitz at 2:31PM, Oct. 6, 2007
Sweet.Fucking Win.