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Abt_Nihil on Aug. 8, 2007
This is the first comic on which I've been adding grey tones regularly, so on these first few pages you may notice I'm still experimenting.
EDIT: I'm very thankful for all your kind words! And I agree, the title is floating a bit…
Fitz at 1:46PM, Aug. 9, 2007
Wow, looks great! I love that kind of shading. The big panel rocks, great job on the perspective... and pretty much everything. And the last panel, with the girl, is just genius, right down to the lettering of "DONK!" The girl kind of makes me think of Hayden Panetterie (Claire from the tv series "Heroes")
TheMidge28 at 10:25AM, Aug. 9, 2007
It looks really good. I like the style and hand drawn sound effects...the gray tones look really good. one thing the title on this page gets kind of lost...unless that is intended. Great page!
RapidoBlue at 9:48AM, Aug. 9, 2007
art is amazing