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Abt_Nihil on Aug. 9, 2007
Maybe somewhere down the road I should analyze why I introduced the main character by juxtaposing her subjective stream of consciousness with this objective city viewpoint… ^^
Actually there's a switch from objective (panel 1) to subjectice (panels 2/3) and back to objective again… like a brief glimpse inside her mind.
usedbooks at 9:09AM, Aug. 12, 2007
I like this narrative style. :) It's interesting. We get to meet the character from the inside out.
Fitz at 7:30AM, Aug. 12, 2007
This mode of narrative seems very natural to me, and the transitions between objective/subjective points of view don't disrupt it. It's all very smooth. I like the internal monologue. Also, as usual, my compliments on the artwork. Panel 2 is my favorite. The flying perspective on the airport looks great, too. I'm actually jealous, I could never really handle complex angles well.
TheMidge28 at 11:23AM, Aug. 10, 2007
That first panel is quite wonderful! the blurrying, the gray tones...great page...