Page 02
Nigellashade on Oct. 24, 2006
Hi again to everyone in DD, here's another update!.. ^___^
Thankyou for all of your support with the last two pages.
All of you are the best!.
The page after this one will be the end of the dream sequence, so it'll be on with the story. But believe me ___; I'm really touched *sniffle*..
Again the editing was provided by our friend Spoonybelle, for she has supported my sister & I with this project. here's a lot of *fluffy Demonic heart wings* for you dear Jen..^^
Best Wishes to you all, & have a Lovely week!
~Extra Hugs~ ~M~
D0m at 4:15PM, May 26, 2007
I'm hooked, I'm in. :-) Fave!
hs5k at 5:29AM, Feb. 8, 2007
ooo... and now a link to some other time and some other world where things are not so good. Another great literary design!
iagojester at 4:24PM, Jan. 12, 2007
Intereting costumes they're wearing. Hmmm. Pretty good pacing on the dialgoue too.
athrun at 7:01AM, Nov. 24, 2006
aww he's got cancer! :( ~athrun!
athenastar17 at 6:16AM, Nov. 1, 2006
yay! update!!! ^____^ poor darius... T-T at least we know he lives for at least while, otherwise we'd have no story, right? XD
Nigellashade at 11:44PM, Oct. 29, 2006
Hello there, glad you've come ^___^ Re: Ninja Jette, Thankyou for admiring the expressions on the main characters, believe me it took me awhile. ^^; It's okay if you missed an update, If I was on your fav's you would see me updated. And I'm glad you Love the softness I created within the coloring, I like creating soft blended tones. Yeah, about the disease that's part of the beginning of my story, of Darius going through something like that. I'm sorry about it making you feel like crying. (I guess I succeed an emotion within the reader, if you feel for the character).. ^__^ Thankyou again for the lovely comment, what you say is also Beautiful. Re: Tamao, My sister admires your comment, she put a lot of effort into the lighting sparkles & glitter. It was her idea to add that special effect... I'm happy you Loved her visual Spiritual Aura!... Thankyou for visiting us, & giving wonderful comments, we thank you! Re: Rubygem, Yeah I like what I've done for her eyes as well...Note: I used three different tone within her eye color. ^____~ And your always welcome for coming to see an update..thankyou for visiting..^___^ Again we love your positive comments, your are all the best!! With lots of Hugs!! ~M~ v~~~~v
Rubygem at 7:57PM, Oct. 29, 2006
Yes update thank you!^^ she has pretty green eyes
Tamao at 12:09PM, Oct. 28, 2006
...I don't really know what to say about this... I really like it ^__^ ooh... and she's not only shining, but also sparkling!!! And giving lights!! She's like... firework or something o.o... But I really really really like it ^______^- I really like the 2th panel... ... well, I had more to say then I thought o.o...
Ninja_Jette at 6:52AM, Oct. 28, 2006
first two panels are so beautiful! their expressions, wow you are really good at drawing expressions... (thats one thing i really have trouble with you see^.^') waaah i missed an update! again I LOVE the softness of the colors! very beautiful! ..... cancer.. this page makes me want to cry.. so very very sad and beautiful! *sniff*
Nigellashade at 11:07AM, Oct. 27, 2006
Hi Everyone, I hope everyone is having a wonderful day so far ^____^.. Re: Yurika24, I hope you will continue to be entertained while being here, your the best!. Thankyou your very kind. Re: Spoonybelle, Thankyou for liking their facial structure, and for Darius in the second panel he would look cute there, *He's blushing in that scene*.. Thankyou for liking the coloring & backgrounds, I always wanted to add detailed organic items to make a scenery more grander than it already is. :P Like I said before Characters are easy backgrounds are hard O__o I'm happy you came Jen. ^___^ Re: Kaminari, I'm happy you like their features, when I designed them some time ago I thought about what key signatures they should have, as individual characters. I like the idea of Multi-cultural characters in my story, I'm happy I brought out some features that is very beautiful. And I really enjoyed creating their clothing designs, when I was younger I would draw only clothes not characters. It looked scary to me O__O....but I always wanted to create more than just clothing styles. And at that time I only can sort of draw female forms, until I had to learn to enhance my techniques. I wanted to make male/female characters, with features & their own theme (in clothing & what they show in personality). Thankyou for coming by here Kaminari, your Awesome! Re: Adariel, I'm proud of the first panel of the girl, my sister is the one that did mist wave effects.. She's wonderful with soft lighting... She brings out the dreamy atmosphere to these dream sequences, & for it being mysterious..true it has a lot to tell..But this is the beginning, everything will become more understandable in time. Adariel thanks for stopping by ^^ Re: Rina_ran, Yeah, she is playful, that's the idea for making it more of a cheerful atmosphere. (while the two are together). About Darius being a patient, I have seen people that has cancer be out of the hospital in certain duration's. My sister & I had our share of knowing people who had cancer, but the people we knew died from it eventually. The character Darius' partial personality was from someone we knew when we were 8 years old. His name was Bryce, he was our age when he was diagnosed with cancer, we saw him going through the process of chemo. And kids at school acted differently in front of him, cause physically he changed. He was the only boy we knew that was nice to us, it's still painful to think about what he went through. when he became more sick and went in a sleep, he never woke up.. His mother mentioned that many gave him toys when he was sick, but the toy my sister & I gave him, he kept to him close until the end. It was know as a ouch bear, (a toy bear with band-Aid on his forehead, a silk wrapping bandage on his arm, and a crystal tear drop on the side of it's cheek. The ouch bear had a sad expression...while it's Band-Aid said ouch. Bryce loved that toy, and for us to remember how he was when he was healthy... Some of Darius's personality trait's will be based on some things how he reacted on some situations. Only in this story, Darius will survive...But I wanted to capture the essence of that boy I knew so long ago. If I were to truly dedicate this character to someone, it would be him. About vampires, I always wanted to create a vampire story..My sister & I always loved the vampire myth since we were 4 years old. And for admiring the myth for so long, we are used to the idea of what is separated of it's fears, & acknowledgments. Darius seems to be a common name for a dark character, but I like the idea of using a name that has meaning, part of it's origins means "Good" in a ancient Greek. I also thought it would be a good situation, to have a name that symbolizes the total opposite, instead of basing a belief that vampires are known to be evil throughout many generations. I hope you continue to enjoy this story Rina, & My heart goes out to you for the ones you know who has this disease. On another note: Ancestral Havens isn't a violent story, it may be a vampire story, but it won't be based on major graphic scenes. Just want to keep that in mind.. ^^; Thankyou for visiting by Rina... Re: Mika_yi, Myrhia appreciates your amazement of the effects she's done, she decides on the glow, lighting & glitter etc ^^ Your compliments is most welcome. Darius having cancer shows of why his life will be changed, & why he is spared in the later updates. I noticed sometimes bot many checks the side description, I couldn't put down "It contains Vampires"...cause I ran out of room..and this description was the best of the versions done before. Mika, thanks for the love you give,,,I hope it comes right back to you as well...^___^ Re: Ender, Dreams are strange huh, yeah...It becomes part of subconscious that can not make you feel complete (sometimes). But in these dreams in this story..it's more than Darius's consciences/ subconsciousness, it's also a spiritual venture of what's yet to come. Dreams can be based on fear or a hidden emotion we all carry, but it comes out in dreams. (I wish I had more dreams like this) ;__; But I'm very happy your enjoying yourself, by reading this story so far. I hope it continues.. ^___^ Re: Hamorhage, Thankyou so much for admiring the shading & the drawn hands. Actually I wasn't great with hands a few years back, so in some way this is a major compliment I'm proud of..^^ *Believe me sometimes, even now it isn't easy* About the text bubbles, yeah I know I'm new with those..but I wanted to create a dreamy orbs when things are discussed in a dream world in my story. I didn't want to create them in a hard color & tone, but a soft structure that is gentle. The balloons will change after the dream is over..like I mentioned before :D some of the text will be part of the panel design, or on the drawn picture in white bubbles. I do like your positive feedback, & of what you brought to my attention.. ^___^ But all of us has a different balloon structure, and it's true, it's something I have to learn more of..^^; Thankyou for commenting, your always welcome to your opinion. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~M~ v~~~~v
Hamorhage at 9:03AM, Oct. 27, 2006
Nice line art and hading..lovely hands (really difficult to draw as elegant as you do). Only thing that could be better I guess are the text baloons, don't ask me how to..I dont have a clue either :D
Ender at 10:53PM, Oct. 26, 2006
I wish I had dreams like that. My dreams are usually weird and have me doing something embarassing in front of friends/strangers. Another well earned 5, great page, can't wait to read more.
Mika_yi at 10:18PM, Oct. 26, 2006
goodness you got some great effects going on here! it's amazing! aws it's so sad to see that he has cancer. poor guy. X.x then again I should read the side bar there huh? lol lots of love to you!
Rina_ran at 11:45AM, Oct. 26, 2006
*looking back on the reply on the last page* it IS a vampire story?! Sweeetness! This is gonna be super interesting I bet. ^o^ Oh, okz. I just saw your description on the page *not completely used to the webpage type layout* Who knew we each had a vampire named Darius! lol..this is gonna be so cool. I guess Darius just fits that type of character. ha ha
Rina_ran at 11:41AM, Oct. 26, 2006
Aww, that's so cute- to see her so playful and yet so very mysterious. He must be a patient in the hospital? Possibly having this dream there. I've known many people who've been diagnosed with cancer. It's very sad. Absolutely beatiful page setup Nigellashade. You have a lovely week too! ^_^
Adariel at 9:59PM, Oct. 25, 2006
first panel is great, dreamy ang mysterious
kaminari at 8:33PM, Oct. 25, 2006
Their faces are gorgeous !! and I love the outfit details
spoonybelle at 7:31PM, Oct. 25, 2006
Yay! I love how their faces came out. He looks cute in panel 2. Coloring and backgrounds remain awesome. Sorry I don't have anything constructive to say. :P
Yurika24 at 6:58PM, Oct. 25, 2006
Cool, this is getting interesting! Oh, and thanks for stopping by!