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Genejoke on May 15, 2012
Not sure how I feel about this page, it does what it's supposed to but I can't help feeling it's lacking something.
at 4:10AM, Sept. 16, 2012
Been thinking about this page. Intuiting myself also that, while it does the job, with a few tweaks the "something lacking" you feel might be removed. What follows is a bit of a brainstorm. Panel 2: Maybe too much ceiling. You could probably move the camera closer to the action Panel 4: in order to provide a focal point (should we be noticing the lady in the background or the violence in the foreground?), a bit of depth of field focus could be used. You could use a different focal point in panel 5. Also wondering how the page might look with a bit of banking on the camera to remove the paralleling effect of the panels and the corridors; that might increase the sense of energy, motion, and excitement on this page. Still catching up with this comic. :-)
at 8:22AM, May 17, 2012
at 8:02AM, May 16, 2012
I don't see any problem with it either...especially if it does its job, getting to the next bit of the story! Still fascinated by this power of Half Pint's! (not that it urgently needs explaining...you could leave any answers as long as you like...often cooler that way!)
at 12:13AM, May 16, 2012
Ditto El Cid and houseofmuses... the page looks fine. Five stars.
at 10:34PM, May 15, 2012
Well since he is Starport security and therefore not any good, he probably won't hit what he aims for.
at 9:48PM, May 15, 2012
can he change gender as well?
at 8:43PM, May 15, 2012
at 6:34PM, May 15, 2012
I think the page works just fine, too. Don't second-guess yourself so much; you'll never get much work done. ;)
at 6:08PM, May 15, 2012
He'd never get picked in a lineup.
at 5:23PM, May 15, 2012
It looks fine; I think maybe for a last panel for the Halfpint segment, it didn't really end on a big cliffhanger, but it looks fine.
at 5:22PM, May 15, 2012
She got off easy!
at 3:23PM, May 15, 2012
Heheheh, his butt's going to look like a laser target after a skeet shoot. :D
at 3:22PM, May 15, 2012