This is my third review. Although this comic may have more readers than the previously reviewed ones, there are still many ways this comic can be improved.
Because of the large amount of negative response, I will only post one more comic. It will be up in about 10 minutes, so I hope that all of you will get the most out of it.
OK then, from now on, I'll make honest comments on your reviews, and there wass no reason for me to insult you like that.[url=http://www.truthandbeautybombs.com/bb/viewtopic.php?t=13204&].[/url].
Crocty I have a bit of a problem with what you just said...
You hate Powerup Comics.
You bashed them continuously.
Now I have to be all voice-of-reason-y. Sigh...
Crocty, don't make it personal. If you saw this single comic minus the other two before it, you would love it.
[b]DISCLAIMER: INAPPROPRIATE SIMILE[/b]
I understand you're offended, but please don't go crazy. I'm beginning to sympathize with IQ 1000. Sure he may be wrong, but he isn't waving his dong in your face, he is just masturbating to a picture of the devil. And hey, he isn't hurting anyone.
I usually read the the page I'm on when I start reading a comic, no matter the art work or dialog. Then I decide whether I should read another page or not. I give every comic a fair chance. I really only judge a comic on whether it reaches the point it's trying to make. So if a comic is supposed to be funny, and it is then I read the comic, regardless of anything art work or anything else.
OK, I agree the comic is bad, but moving onto your reviews (I differ a little why (I'm OK with VG comics).
An easy way to make your reviews better is to use actual images from the comic and then type over it. It shouldn't be too hard to do, and it would, if anything else make you seem credible (at least a little).
Also, YOU DON'T NEED ART FOR A COMIC.
Ever heard of a "book"?
It's something intelligent people read. It contains no pictures!
BUT IT STILL TELLS A STORY!
I mean, it must be impossible for someone to read that, if your IQ is lower than 2, like yours.
OK, while I DO hate Powerup comics, here's what I think about your review.
1. It's a gaming comic, retard. That's why it focuses on video games.
2. There are jokes, you might not get them, but there are some there.
3. It doesn't CONSTANTLY feature that guy shooting the guy in the face.
4. Copy and paste? You mean like your review background?
5. Your "To improve this comic" section is very unclear. You don't say HOW he could make them more realistic.
6. Kill yourself.
Yes, but when you first look at a comic, what attracts you to it? Before you can get into the story of a comic, you must be attracted to the art. However if the art is no good, how will you be attracted to a comic in the first place. That answer is: you can't. Without art, a comic isn't worth reading.
It seems you have the same arguement as you did with F&V, which is that you hate the art. Art does not completly make a comic. Powerup comics have some pretty funny punchlines, which does make a comic. And I do not think Powerup Comics is aiming for a complex story lines. It's a comic strip, which are just random funny jokes.
Zheror at 1:37PM, Feb. 14, 2008
Now THIS, I believe 100%.
IQ 1000 at 9:52PM, Feb. 12, 2008
Because of the large amount of negative response, I will only post one more comic. It will be up in about 10 minutes, so I hope that all of you will get the most out of it.
crocty at 8:43PM, Feb. 12, 2008
OK then, from now on, I'll make honest comments on your reviews, and there wass no reason for me to insult you like that.[url=http://www.truthandbeautybombs.com/bb/viewtopic.php?t=13204&].[/url].
crocty at 8:38PM, Feb. 12, 2008
Yeah OK, probably a good point, Bocaj. But still, his reviews are simply horrid.
Bocaj at 8:32PM, Feb. 12, 2008
Crocty I have a bit of a problem with what you just said... You hate Powerup Comics. You bashed them continuously. Now I have to be all voice-of-reason-y. Sigh... Crocty, don't make it personal. If you saw this single comic minus the other two before it, you would love it. [b]DISCLAIMER: INAPPROPRIATE SIMILE[/b] I understand you're offended, but please don't go crazy. I'm beginning to sympathize with IQ 1000. Sure he may be wrong, but he isn't waving his dong in your face, he is just masturbating to a picture of the devil. And hey, he isn't hurting anyone.
Copy and Paste at 8:19PM, Feb. 12, 2008
I usually read the the page I'm on when I start reading a comic, no matter the art work or dialog. Then I decide whether I should read another page or not. I give every comic a fair chance. I really only judge a comic on whether it reaches the point it's trying to make. So if a comic is supposed to be funny, and it is then I read the comic, regardless of anything art work or anything else.
Bocaj at 8:17PM, Feb. 12, 2008
OK, I agree the comic is bad, but moving onto your reviews (I differ a little why (I'm OK with VG comics). An easy way to make your reviews better is to use actual images from the comic and then type over it. It shouldn't be too hard to do, and it would, if anything else make you seem credible (at least a little).
crocty at 8:15PM, Feb. 12, 2008
Also, YOU DON'T NEED ART FOR A COMIC. Ever heard of a "book"? It's something intelligent people read. It contains no pictures! BUT IT STILL TELLS A STORY! I mean, it must be impossible for someone to read that, if your IQ is lower than 2, like yours.
crocty at 8:14PM, Feb. 12, 2008
OK, while I DO hate Powerup comics, here's what I think about your review. 1. It's a gaming comic, retard. That's why it focuses on video games. 2. There are jokes, you might not get them, but there are some there. 3. It doesn't CONSTANTLY feature that guy shooting the guy in the face. 4. Copy and paste? You mean like your review background? 5. Your "To improve this comic" section is very unclear. You don't say HOW he could make them more realistic. 6. Kill yourself.
IQ 1000 at 8:06PM, Feb. 12, 2008
Yes, but when you first look at a comic, what attracts you to it? Before you can get into the story of a comic, you must be attracted to the art. However if the art is no good, how will you be attracted to a comic in the first place. That answer is: you can't. Without art, a comic isn't worth reading.
Copy and Paste at 7:56PM, Feb. 12, 2008
It seems you have the same arguement as you did with F&V, which is that you hate the art. Art does not completly make a comic. Powerup comics have some pretty funny punchlines, which does make a comic. And I do not think Powerup Comics is aiming for a complex story lines. It's a comic strip, which are just random funny jokes.