Chapter 1 - Meeting - Page 2
Chinchikurin on July 15, 2007
This is page two (again, not very exciting and not much is being explained)
And just if anyone is wondering, the girl is called Elone and she is looking over her shoulder - the angle is really weird and i dont think i've got the hang of it yet >< But yay the hand turned out great XD
Again, i would appreciate crit and tips ^^
Fitz at 10:08PM, July 16, 2007
The artwork looks VERY good. Seriously, quite pro. Great job on the shading. And actualy, I figured out she's looking over her shoulder. The anatomy would demand some hint of a neck, as Rusty Knight here mentioned, but the character is drawn in chibi (I think...) style, which allows some degree of sketchiness. So it's all good.
Rusty Knight at 7:35PM, July 16, 2007
That angle with her looking over her shoulder, you should have probably put a hint of her collar and neck.