ok...I see you are very enthusiastic about this comic you got going but someone has to speak out.
problems
1: Bad resizing...and just scale in general
2: lazy paint made background writing
3: two toned backgrounds are NEVER good, unless used in some filler or if previously proven self with real backgrounds.
4 : there is no speech bubble tails. now we comic nerds are smart, and can usualy tell whos talking, but we are called comic nerds cause we are usualy lazy, and therefor can't be bothered spending time deciding whos saying what and in what order. so give tails
5: add borders to your bubbles as it will make it stand out better
6, try to make your own sprite, be it edited and/or recolour or from scratch, pixel by pixel
7: no chat room lingo, ie, "u" or "lol" ect
8: grammer and spelling issues here and there
9: sleezy expresion marks...Fox, on fourth pannel
10: Pannel dividers to thin
good things
You seem to have the right humor, and not that bad grammer and spriting abilty
Result
If you take down what i just said and include them all in your comic, you will improve greatly....I am in no way dissing or Flaming you, merely pointing out what must be done.
Now im no expert at doing it, but i am sure i can help and give advice here and there so, if you need a hand mate, im here
I will fav this comic and study its progress, if you take on board what i say, then well done, if not.....well, good luck
SpennyJ at 9:08PM, Feb. 24, 2007
ok...I see you are very enthusiastic about this comic you got going but someone has to speak out. problems 1: Bad resizing...and just scale in general 2: lazy paint made background writing 3: two toned backgrounds are NEVER good, unless used in some filler or if previously proven self with real backgrounds. 4 : there is no speech bubble tails. now we comic nerds are smart, and can usualy tell whos talking, but we are called comic nerds cause we are usualy lazy, and therefor can't be bothered spending time deciding whos saying what and in what order. so give tails 5: add borders to your bubbles as it will make it stand out better 6, try to make your own sprite, be it edited and/or recolour or from scratch, pixel by pixel 7: no chat room lingo, ie, "u" or "lol" ect 8: grammer and spelling issues here and there 9: sleezy expresion marks...Fox, on fourth pannel 10: Pannel dividers to thin good things You seem to have the right humor, and not that bad grammer and spriting abilty Result If you take down what i just said and include them all in your comic, you will improve greatly....I am in no way dissing or Flaming you, merely pointing out what must be done. Now im no expert at doing it, but i am sure i can help and give advice here and there so, if you need a hand mate, im here I will fav this comic and study its progress, if you take on board what i say, then well done, if not.....well, good luck