D'you think you can take the time to go over it and edit it? I don't mean it in a bad way, but excessive mispelling completely unnerves me. I mean, one or two mispellings is okay, but four on a page is an awful lot...
I'm so sorry. It's so cool!
I, personaly, stay away from screen tones...they just don't work with my style...however, it looks good so far with yours. One suggestion; on close ups like the two here use another darker screen tone for the darkest parts (inner ear, etc) It'll give the page more depth ^-^
Mikato at 7:40AM, Nov. 2, 2008
Love it so far
Jashiku at 7:33PM, Jan. 3, 2007
that looks really nice!! Umm, the girl with the pony tail looks like Ino from Naruto 0.o but anywayz, awesome pg.
ZoeStead at 6:17AM, Nov. 8, 2006
Looks great!
Darkmax at 3:49PM, Oct. 29, 2006
Come on no pro comics here NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wind at 5:49PM, Oct. 10, 2006
hope you update soon i really wanna see more.^^
Bliss at 12:40PM, Sept. 7, 2006
D'you think you can take the time to go over it and edit it? I don't mean it in a bad way, but excessive mispelling completely unnerves me. I mean, one or two mispellings is okay, but four on a page is an awful lot... I'm so sorry. It's so cool!
mimiche at 6:34PM, Aug. 29, 2006
So pretty!
Yumeko at 3:57AM, Aug. 28, 2006
Wow, beautiful manga style ^_^~
end_game at 4:25PM, July 29, 2006
cool
alexandera at 8:18PM, July 28, 2006
thank u^^
Oestaira at 6:14PM, July 28, 2006
I, personaly, stay away from screen tones...they just don't work with my style...however, it looks good so far with yours. One suggestion; on close ups like the two here use another darker screen tone for the darkest parts (inner ear, etc) It'll give the page more depth ^-^
alexandera at 5:11PM, July 28, 2006
this is my first time ever using screen tones what do ya think?