I like this. Your comic has some great artistic style. The past few panels are really pretty and interesting. However, even though your main character is just starting to get more body shape and definition, Her body shape is unrealistic so far. The girl or young woman is a perfect stick figure, she needs to look more human. This does not translate into that she needs big boobs, but she needs a more human shape about her. She also needs a chin. I like how you tried to shadow her neck, but you made her chin disappear! I'm going to be following this comic, and I'm excited to see how it will transform over time.
AshkeyTheRed at 12:41AM, Aug. 24, 2012
I like this. Your comic has some great artistic style. The past few panels are really pretty and interesting. However, even though your main character is just starting to get more body shape and definition, Her body shape is unrealistic so far. The girl or young woman is a perfect stick figure, she needs to look more human. This does not translate into that she needs big boobs, but she needs a more human shape about her. She also needs a chin. I like how you tried to shadow her neck, but you made her chin disappear! I'm going to be following this comic, and I'm excited to see how it will transform over time.