Coveinant Journey

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Memeories of a Human

Coveinant on Sept. 30, 2007

This is just a page to tell what happen to me before I became a reploid. The Human Abolision of Reploid Destruction (HARD) is an anti-reploid group that you'll see throughout this comic. BTW do any body have a sheet of human shooter sprites, I'm short on them.

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Coveinant at 2:03PM, Nov. 16, 2007

Storm Eagle stage for this page.

blackhook at 4:41AM, Oct. 16, 2007

My comic is made with Paint and it isnÃÂ´t that bad BTW isnÃÂ´t that a Castelvania BG?

Egnio at 4:23PM, Oct. 2, 2007

Never excuse yourself with paint again, okay? i've seen and made good comics using only paint. The suggestions I gave you require no more than only paint. But yeah, practice a bit then.

Coveinant at 10:18PM, Oct. 1, 2007

I use paint, can't do as much. And the I'm still new to spriting, so I match people with the colors. remember this, I use paint and it is not as good a photoshop, deal with the comic and I have a limited number of sprites so shut up about those.

Egnio at 7:52PM, Oct. 1, 2007

Up for some constructive criticism? 1.- Make the speech bubbles outside of the comic, with a border, centered text, and then make them show who is talking. At least you used them, so you get a point there. 2.- Panels are way to big. There's not much happening. 1/3 of the first one, splitting the second one in 2 parts and 1/3 of the first one, well organized, would be a lot better. 3.- Don't mix speech bubbles. Never, unless both characters or more are saying the same thing. 4.- Add expressibility to comments. Saying "Die" isn't as convincing as "DIE!". No, don't use "????" as a comment again. Use "Huh?", "Uhm?" or something like that. There are other mistakes, but for now, you should like it this way. This looks way better than other ones I've seen before. I'm looking forward to see more, and some improvements as well.