theRedDeath at 6:32PM, Dec. 1, 2010

Nepath's art is awesome, so I say that forgives nay awkwardness in the dialogue. Besides, people are spoiled by writing in fiction. In real life people are awkward all the time. You ever be thinking of one word, but trying to say another, but end up saying a non-existent word that is the combination of both? I can't tell you how many times I've said: "Wentterday" in a conversation. You never see that stuff in comics!

Neilsama at 8:17PM, Nov. 30, 2010

Nepath does cool artifacting on the lighting.

alschroeder at 5:34PM, Nov. 30, 2010

My fault then. Nepath was working off my dialogue here. Hopefully, Thursday's update won't be as confusing. And we'll have twice-weekly updates (at least) all the way through December.

AzuJOD at 4:09PM, Nov. 30, 2010

Yeah, the art is great, but the dialogue is a little wierd.

Ozmandious at 8:45AM, Nov. 30, 2010

have to agree, while the art is excellent the dialouge in panel 2 is a bit off

alschroeder at 7:06AM, Nov. 30, 2010

They're giving him their names. After all, they ARE trying to recruit him.

alschroeder at 5:44AM, Nov. 30, 2010

Remember, this is happening before the present installments of Energize, during the year he was hunted by the law (and Heroes Unite), just after his team-up with Fearless and Bombshell, et al. Misty's still alive, he's just beginning to understand how much power he has, etc.

dwrean at 5:41AM, Nov. 30, 2010

the dialogue seems a bit odd in the second panel. when he goes, 'no, you...' they give their names. is it that they are just calling each other to be ready cause energize is a chargin his laser or are they actually giving him their names? nepath sure knows how to make someone glow though.

xmung at 12:01AM, Nov. 30, 2010

Great stuff!

algeya at 10:26PM, Nov. 29, 2010

So he will do it for free. (just kidding)