Jaffar, It says "A minute later" in the yellow box.
-Resize
-Can't understand what order the peoples are talking in panels 1, 2, & 4.
-Make the tails look like tails.
-Bigger panels
-Bigger Text
-I suggest using the text "Comic Sans MS."
In English, we read left to right - up to down. You're text is out of place. Fix that.
Also, re-size.
And, for God's sake, DON'T FUCKING USE THE STARTER POKÃâ°MON >_
pokemonfreak321 at 11:19AM, Dec. 24, 2006
Jaffar, It says "A minute later" in the yellow box. -Resize -Can't understand what order the peoples are talking in panels 1, 2, & 4. -Make the tails look like tails. -Bigger panels -Bigger Text -I suggest using the text "Comic Sans MS."
KevinClifford at 9:57AM, Dec. 24, 2006
In English, we read left to right - up to down. You're text is out of place. Fix that. Also, re-size. And, for God's sake, DON'T FUCKING USE THE STARTER POKÃâ°MON >_