Peipei at 7:06PM, March 25, 2014

@darrell: Thanks! @Asbin: Thanks for the kind comment! It is a good idea for them to not all go to sleep at the same time. :) @man in black: Thanks for the comment. :)

man in black at 5:53PM, March 24, 2014

great page

Asbin at 5:02PM, March 24, 2014

I love the coloring on the camp site panels, and yeah, taking turns keeping watch is a good idea

darrell at 3:43PM, March 24, 2014

5

Peipei at 2:16PM, March 24, 2014

@KimLuster: She's gained a respect for Orn. She was probably just waiting on Orn to prove herself all this time. :) @Anubis: That may be so. ;) @usedbooks: Thought it would be fun :3! lol @fallopiancrusader: Yeah, I like to add relation between the characters and the setting. And no, you didn't miss anything. The spots are still there, just harder to see at night xD.

fallopiancrusader at 10:25AM, March 24, 2014

I like how you're including at least one purely atmospheric panel per page. I notice the dark spots are missing from the sky now. Did I miss something, or should I be intrigued?

usedbooks at 5:49AM, March 24, 2014

I like seeing the three of them lined up in the first panel. :)

Anubis at 5:21AM, March 24, 2014

I sense some light and subtle flirting

KimLuster at 4:31AM, March 24, 2014

Bel's attitude toward Orn has completely changed. '...Just another wound among many other.' That phrase is deep on many levels. I like the campfire effect too