This is my first comic ever and I am THRILLED to find out how easy (and wonderful) Drunk Duck is about the whole hosting thing. I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed making it and showing it to my friends back home!
While the structure of the joke is somewhat 'been there, done that' the dialogue is absolutely hilarious! The crotch pillows and the '...and they're going WILD!' lines crack me up (just the way it is 'delivered' makes it hilarious).
It would actually work better, IMO, without the TV dialouge - all that's needed for the joke is delivered perfectly by the reaction of the guys...
Characters are a bit wooden at the moment (I was trying to avoid reusing that joke, but oh well), but as you practice more that will no doubt improve. There facial expressions are handled very well, though :)
Pretty good for your first try.
You really need to try to understand anatomy. The guys look incredibly stiff (no pun, ha ha).
The joke's a little played out, other than the crotch pillow part. Hm.
Green_Tangerine at 12:04PM, Feb. 13, 2006
haha, crotch pillows... Instant classic.
Habilis_Orian at 8:59PM, Feb. 11, 2006
That's rich man. lol, crotch pillows.
coinilius at 9:44PM, Feb. 7, 2006
While the structure of the joke is somewhat 'been there, done that' the dialogue is absolutely hilarious! The crotch pillows and the '...and they're going WILD!' lines crack me up (just the way it is 'delivered' makes it hilarious). It would actually work better, IMO, without the TV dialouge - all that's needed for the joke is delivered perfectly by the reaction of the guys... Characters are a bit wooden at the moment (I was trying to avoid reusing that joke, but oh well), but as you practice more that will no doubt improve. There facial expressions are handled very well, though :)
RayeXIII at 11:21AM, Feb. 2, 2006
Thats nasty! But awesome!
lothar at 6:54AM, Feb. 2, 2006
Yea rite ! like that comercial ever ends !!!!
Office_Zone at 1:34PM, Feb. 1, 2006
heh! Crotch pillows! heheh!
Chickenfoot at 11:11AM, Jan. 31, 2006
ewww...thats awesome. +5+5+5+5+5
gobbler at 9:14PM, Jan. 30, 2006
i like the writing but you need to work on perspective, id recomend trying to do figure drawing.
strongbad_999 at 9:10PM, Jan. 30, 2006
Nothing makes me happier than positive review! Thanks people, I'll try to comment back on ya.
toonman at 9:03PM, Jan. 30, 2006
Good stuff.
Terminal at 6:56PM, Jan. 30, 2006
Being an insomniac an watching Comedy Central every night, the commerical loses it`s...you know.
ABC at 6:32PM, Jan. 30, 2006
Pretty good for your first try. You really need to try to understand anatomy. The guys look incredibly stiff (no pun, ha ha). The joke's a little played out, other than the crotch pillow part. Hm.
Antilus at 6:16PM, Jan. 30, 2006
Naughty, I'm surprised they haven't reverted to homosexuality
subcultured at 6:11PM, Jan. 30, 2006
hahaha nasty
The mediocre one at 6:04PM, Jan. 30, 2006
Me like, and I have seen a few moments like this myself.