Yeah, you are lazy. You should do another comic. Im only giving you a five cause I seen the other version of this comic you made and it was much better.
Good way to start off. Looks very intersting and I'll be glad to see where it goes.
Also, sorry to agree with the critic (*cough*ashlees*cough*), but at first glance, the 2nd comic is a little visually confusing. In the end it comes together, but yeah, something more is needed to seperate the drawings.
Sorry to be longwinded and I hope you don't think I'm telling you what to do. Just a suggestion.
So far, a little rocky. What you need to do, first-off, is make panels - panels are essential! That way, dialouge and pictures aren't muddled. Bubbles are also a biggie.
I'm sorta' confused on what's happening, but I guess some comics start out like that, eh?
evadragon04 at 7:15AM, Aug. 15, 2006
yeah, are you ever going to update?
Emotional at 7:59PM, Feb. 16, 2006
Stop lying randal, just wondering foamy... when do you plan to update?
Randal at 9:54AM, Feb. 16, 2006
i too, am a lazy bastard.
kitty_su at 5:13AM, Feb. 16, 2006
I don't get it at all yet, but I like the teddy bear on page 1. Hee.
evadragon04 at 5:38PM, Feb. 15, 2006
Yeah, you are lazy. You should do another comic. Im only giving you a five cause I seen the other version of this comic you made and it was much better.
FOAMY89 at 3:27PM, Feb. 15, 2006
Yes, I am a lazy b*stard.
FOAMY89 at 2:21PM, Feb. 9, 2006
Thanks for the suggestions, I will use your advice to enhance the quality of my comic.
Eirikr at 8:33PM, Feb. 7, 2006
Good way to start off. Looks very intersting and I'll be glad to see where it goes. Also, sorry to agree with the critic (*cough*ashlees*cough*), but at first glance, the 2nd comic is a little visually confusing. In the end it comes together, but yeah, something more is needed to seperate the drawings. Sorry to be longwinded and I hope you don't think I'm telling you what to do. Just a suggestion.
Emotional at 8:56PM, Feb. 5, 2006
I have nothing to say cept thats they way I like it. update when yah feel like it, I'll be reading.
AshleeS at 9:41AM, Jan. 28, 2006
So far, a little rocky. What you need to do, first-off, is make panels - panels are essential! That way, dialouge and pictures aren't muddled. Bubbles are also a biggie. I'm sorta' confused on what's happening, but I guess some comics start out like that, eh?
FOAMY89 at 8:08AM, Jan. 28, 2006
Yes I know, just don't read this comic if this doesn't satisfy your entertainment needs towards web comics.