I love the sense of humor in this story. It started off hilariously and had me burst out laughing by the last panel, in which the image is in such funny contrast with the narrative. Gurn, sitting there... You can almost hear him gasp. The coloring is awesome, too!
I updated the first page with a few changes. The text is now bolder and easier to read, I altered the colors on the first panel to make the easier to read, and I added some shadow on Gurn in the last panel to make it look more dynamic.
The second page is penciled. I'll be inking and coloring tonight so it should be up by tomorrow.
I've never done digital lettering before so I didn't know the text would be so small (and I also don't know the right font to use).
Anyways, I'm new to this website but I've been making comics for a while. This is the first one I felt I wanted to share with the rest of the world. It took me half an hour to pencil, and hour to ink, and a couple of hours to color so I should be able to upload atleast 2 pages a week but I'm in the Navy so my schedule is sporadic.
Anyways, enjoy. Any comments, critique, and/or tips are appreciated.
AfroPig93 at 5:59PM, Feb. 9, 2008
This comic looks like it will be hilarious!
Fitz at 1:52AM, Oct. 19, 2007
I love the sense of humor in this story. It started off hilariously and had me burst out laughing by the last panel, in which the image is in such funny contrast with the narrative. Gurn, sitting there... You can almost hear him gasp. The coloring is awesome, too!
antcomics at 1:51PM, Oct. 9, 2007
Nice! I'm already drawn in by the atmosphere.
TheMidge28 at 8:28PM, July 21, 2007
The art is good...but is the comic funny or serious? By the art I would say funny. The tone is set then. Just asking.
angry_black_guy at 7:19AM, May 4, 2007
I updated the first page with a few changes. The text is now bolder and easier to read, I altered the colors on the first panel to make the easier to read, and I added some shadow on Gurn in the last panel to make it look more dynamic. The second page is penciled. I'll be inking and coloring tonight so it should be up by tomorrow.
angry_black_guy at 10:38PM, May 2, 2007
I've never done digital lettering before so I didn't know the text would be so small (and I also don't know the right font to use). Anyways, I'm new to this website but I've been making comics for a while. This is the first one I felt I wanted to share with the rest of the world. It took me half an hour to pencil, and hour to ink, and a couple of hours to color so I should be able to upload atleast 2 pages a week but I'm in the Navy so my schedule is sporadic. Anyways, enjoy. Any comments, critique, and/or tips are appreciated.