The art is gorgeous, but the page as a whole... it's simultaneously both too expositiony (telling the reader what's going on rather than showing), and not enough (nearly every panel shows something interesting, but not long enough or from a good enough perspective to develop that interest). It might be better to expand this into a short introduction chapter.
love this page your art just looks great in it especially the cliffs and dirt (but I've said that havn't I?) He seems to be lacking a bit in the top and back of his head in the last panel though. Other than that stellar work as always Zoe
M_Northstar at 1:08PM, Dec. 24, 2009
The art is gorgeous, but the page as a whole... it's simultaneously both too expositiony (telling the reader what's going on rather than showing), and not enough (nearly every panel shows something interesting, but not long enough or from a good enough perspective to develop that interest). It might be better to expand this into a short introduction chapter.
Eddie Jensen at 9:20AM, Feb. 22, 2009
love this page your art just looks great in it especially the cliffs and dirt (but I've said that havn't I?) He seems to be lacking a bit in the top and back of his head in the last panel though. Other than that stellar work as always Zoe
dragonrider at 8:13PM, Jan. 15, 2009
Go Silas avenge the deaths of your parents
Mushroomcomix at 2:48PM, Jan. 15, 2009
Great moral to that story!