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DankmanZero on July 21, 2006
at 3:23PM, Oct. 13, 2009
Lil dude is pretty stoked in that last panel.
at 11:42AM, July 24, 2006
Pretty good. I liked that picture of the king sitting in his room.
Oh, and while your offer is tempting, I think the cruddy paint art on my comic suits it pretty well, so, no.
at 6:40AM, July 23, 2006
Ruler is a good idea, because this comic is like a sad attempt at a clean nice looking comic, i promise the next few pages will look nicer!!! I be done it and more by monday!!! Thank for the bashing, my heart broke but it will be back. lol please dont feel bad im only kidding, kind of...
at 2:47AM, July 23, 2006
This is cute. :D The story progress is going nicely. You may want to use a ruler, but I usually don't bother with panel straightness. In some cases it adds to the style. :D
at 3:49PM, July 22, 2006
at 3:40PM, July 22, 2006
Ya, your right this is too good of a story to waste on shitty drawings. I start working on better pics from this point on, looking back on it it pisses me off to see Cladus's head shape different in each pic.
at 12:33PM, July 22, 2006
Yeah, I think inking this would do wonders for the coherency.
at 10:26AM, July 22, 2006
your line work is a little choppy, but I can definitely see the story going in my head...if you don't have a computer program to clean it up have you thought about inking it by hand? You could definitely clean it up even without a computer. :D
at 10:22AM, July 22, 2006
I think the art could use a bit of work. It feels a bit choppy. I think that it would really help if you used a ruler to do your panels.