Pretty good. I liked that picture of the king sitting in his room.
Oh, and while your offer is tempting, I think the cruddy paint art on my comic suits it pretty well, so, no.
Ruler is a good idea, because this comic is like a sad attempt at a clean nice looking comic, i promise the next few pages will look nicer!!! I be done it and more by monday!!! Thank for the bashing, my heart broke but it will be back. lol please dont feel bad im only kidding, kind of...
This is cute. :D The story progress is going nicely. You may want to use a ruler, but I usually don't bother with panel straightness. In some cases it adds to the style. :D
Ya, your right this is too good of a story to waste on shitty drawings. I start working on better pics from this point on, looking back on it it pisses me off to see Cladus's head shape different in each pic.
your line work is a little choppy, but I can definitely see the story going in my head...if you don't have a computer program to clean it up have you thought about inking it by hand? You could definitely clean it up even without a computer. :D
anonymous
at 10:22AM, July 22, 2006
I think the art could use a bit of work. It feels a bit choppy. I think that it would really help if you used a ruler to do your panels.
webcomics heh at 3:23PM, Oct. 13, 2009
Lil dude is pretty stoked in that last panel.
LIZARD_B1TE at 11:42AM, July 24, 2006
Pretty good. I liked that picture of the king sitting in his room. Oh, and while your offer is tempting, I think the cruddy paint art on my comic suits it pretty well, so, no.
DankmanZero at 6:40AM, July 23, 2006
Ruler is a good idea, because this comic is like a sad attempt at a clean nice looking comic, i promise the next few pages will look nicer!!! I be done it and more by monday!!! Thank for the bashing, my heart broke but it will be back. lol please dont feel bad im only kidding, kind of...
adriley at 2:47AM, July 23, 2006
This is cute. :D The story progress is going nicely. You may want to use a ruler, but I usually don't bother with panel straightness. In some cases it adds to the style. :D
DankmanZero at 3:49PM, July 22, 2006
Inking?
DankmanZero at 3:40PM, July 22, 2006
Ya, your right this is too good of a story to waste on shitty drawings. I start working on better pics from this point on, looking back on it it pisses me off to see Cladus's head shape different in each pic.
Rich at 12:33PM, July 22, 2006
Yeah, I think inking this would do wonders for the coherency.
thatreevesgirl at 10:26AM, July 22, 2006
your line work is a little choppy, but I can definitely see the story going in my head...if you don't have a computer program to clean it up have you thought about inking it by hand? You could definitely clean it up even without a computer. :D
anonymous at 10:22AM, July 22, 2006
I think the art could use a bit of work. It feels a bit choppy. I think that it would really help if you used a ruler to do your panels.