1#The beginning
Midnightmoon on Oct. 5, 2010
And mario and luigi's adventure doesn't start here, this is just a intro.. I'm still thinking if i do the page in 4 panels or 6 because, i don't really know what's better. But i'm going to find it out in the next pages! I also finish chapter 1 on my paper!
You might have noticed that i'm dutch. So not all the words are well written. I hope it will not bothering you when you read my comic! Enjoy!
Ettie at 5:17PM, Oct. 6, 2010
I think it looks good. Just keep improving, the paneling needs a little bit of work, and technical things, but not bad for a start.
XM0stLyGhOstLyX at 4:34PM, Oct. 6, 2010
This needs some major work... Start by making some decent word bubbles.