What I find most disturbing is the lack of backgrounds and the textboxes. You do have a couple of interesting characters, but at the same time, your moving things along a little too fast. That said,if you go to slowly people will get bored, you have to find that happy medium. Work on the textboxes and backgrounds, and you'll see relatively good reactions. Had to dock you 2 points.
Last issue you said it'll get better looking, and it better. I want to see what else you have, so update quickly alright? If it gets better, I'll rate. If not, pointers.
I won't give you pointers though since you said it'll get better.
I'mma watch this comic, but not fav it until it gets going.
Altune at 6:22AM, June 28, 2008
What I find most disturbing is the lack of backgrounds and the textboxes. You do have a couple of interesting characters, but at the same time, your moving things along a little too fast. That said,if you go to slowly people will get bored, you have to find that happy medium. Work on the textboxes and backgrounds, and you'll see relatively good reactions. Had to dock you 2 points.
THKNN_NUL at 2:52PM, June 23, 2008
I'll PQ you mine...
ReaperEX at 2:22PM, June 23, 2008
Last issue you said it'll get better looking, and it better. I want to see what else you have, so update quickly alright? If it gets better, I'll rate. If not, pointers. I won't give you pointers though since you said it'll get better. I'mma watch this comic, but not fav it until it gets going.