Chpt 1: Page 8
ohnn on Sept. 16, 2007
not one of my favorited inked ones. i messed up in the last panel. >.< *mutter unintelligently*
ohnn on Sept. 16, 2007
not one of my favorited inked ones. i messed up in the last panel. >.< *mutter unintelligently*
Janen at 2:34PM, Sept. 17, 2007
Really resembles the chaos which is recess.
ohnn at 1:33PM, Sept. 17, 2007
after i inked it i also realized that the transitions weren't the best. bascially, in the last page, Melody and Terry were arguing, but when she saw Carly (and the rest of the people in the table) she remembered why she came there and ignored terry. yea. i need to work on transitions from panel to panel.
Miss Annoying at 12:41PM, Sept. 17, 2007
heh heh
TheMidge28 at 8:19AM, Sept. 17, 2007
I really like how this page turned out...your inking is superb! is someone checking out someones's butt? just one critique...its sometimes hard to follow with the character pages inserted who is who in the next scene...i am a little lost in trying to discern who is who...I know they are all still at lunch but what happened to the two fighting?