The Killer's Club (page one)
silas on Dec. 5, 2006
I finished this page a bit faster than I thought I would so I decided to just go ahead and post it. I don't like making people wait since I don't like waiting myself.
–Silas
Fright
silas on Dec. 5, 2006
I finished this page a bit faster than I thought I would so I decided to just go ahead and post it. I don't like making people wait since I don't like waiting myself.
–Silas
kahvie at 11:29AM, Feb. 2, 2007
Cool page layout! Nice touch with the coffee stain, too:).
Green_Tangerine at 3:43PM, Dec. 7, 2006
ok, I really love all the little details, like the ink test at the bottom. Good stuff.
silas at 9:57AM, Dec. 7, 2006
Hi Mr Mustard Seed, thank you for dropping by and thanks a lot for the crits! Yes, I wanted to keep it open ended since at true size all of the page is legible. I've added a magnified portion of the non-legible part next so please click on to finish reading the page. Reading it gives you a little better insight into the story as it unfolds, but you don't have to read it all to get the story. You'll see. --Silas
Mr Mustard Seed at 10:43AM, Dec. 6, 2006
Hmmm ... I'm kind of surprised you didn't break this down into a few panels to focus attention on the important portions of the page ... This would have made it possible to focus on the singular aspects of the page in sequential order, controlling the flow instead of making it open ended ... But as an open ended page, it probably still accomplishes what you're after, eh "S"? Keep posting; I'll keep reading ...