Your comic needs some sort of plot.... Although you used COMPLETE randomness to write them (which I admit, it's kinda funny) you shouldn't use THAT kind of randomness. Oh, and stereotyping characters is an offense to this page: http://www.fragile-minds.com/crashnbass/donts.html
So please don't be like those people...
Anyways, I'll be lenient and give you a 4.
I can't even begin to imagine what went through your head when you were making this, it must have been something along the lines of "great, now you can't see the sprites for the background I will have them talk gibberish, that will make a fantastic page!" but what you actually made was more like a bad acid trip that ran straight through the 4th wall.
What is going on in this comic? I don't understand any of it. It's very haphazardus, and the lines dont' seem to fall into any paticular order. They all seem to be talking about very different things, and none of which fall into any sort of sensable plot as they are all out of context.
The background your useing is horrid for the sprites your placeing over it. The sprites are colorful, as is the background. This makes things very confusing and chaotic. The text is hard to read (light pink of white? Might as well just not writ anything at all). Add the white border to the eye blinding colors on the issue, and the insane convorsation, and you have a comic that is impossible to read and figure out.
There is allot of work to be done here. Most may seem like a big deal, but really, just minor teaks and edits.
Actually, if you read my comments, I usually left information regarding what was wrong with it, not just "What the hell is this? This is so f***ing horrible!".
And to make things right, you must know what is wrong.
I also left links to four different pages that teach you what NOT to do in sprite comicking in one of my comments.
Sadly, you cannot ban people from commenting on your comics. And seeing as I always leave information on why the page is either good or bad, I am hurting noone. I really think you ought to be nicer to people who comment on your pages.
cybernet213 at 10:20AM, Nov. 25, 2006
Your comic needs some sort of plot.... Although you used COMPLETE randomness to write them (which I admit, it's kinda funny) you shouldn't use THAT kind of randomness. Oh, and stereotyping characters is an offense to this page: http://www.fragile-minds.com/crashnbass/donts.html So please don't be like those people... Anyways, I'll be lenient and give you a 4.
CutmanSteel at 8:59PM, Sept. 25, 2006
I agree with Rich and Lefarce.
PlayerOne at 1:19PM, Sept. 9, 2006
I want to destroy you.
Higgle Doo at 5:40PM, Aug. 27, 2006
hee hee. randomness. you gotta love it.
Mimarin at 5:35AM, Aug. 27, 2006
I can't even begin to imagine what went through your head when you were making this, it must have been something along the lines of "great, now you can't see the sprites for the background I will have them talk gibberish, that will make a fantastic page!" but what you actually made was more like a bad acid trip that ran straight through the 4th wall.
lefarce at 8:11PM, Aug. 26, 2006
What is going on in this comic? I don't understand any of it. It's very haphazardus, and the lines dont' seem to fall into any paticular order. They all seem to be talking about very different things, and none of which fall into any sort of sensable plot as they are all out of context. The background your useing is horrid for the sprites your placeing over it. The sprites are colorful, as is the background. This makes things very confusing and chaotic. The text is hard to read (light pink of white? Might as well just not writ anything at all). Add the white border to the eye blinding colors on the issue, and the insane convorsation, and you have a comic that is impossible to read and figure out. There is allot of work to be done here. Most may seem like a big deal, but really, just minor teaks and edits.
Rich at 5:30PM, Aug. 12, 2006
Actually, if you read my comments, I usually left information regarding what was wrong with it, not just "What the hell is this? This is so f***ing horrible!". And to make things right, you must know what is wrong. I also left links to four different pages that teach you what NOT to do in sprite comicking in one of my comments.
Rich at 11:38AM, Aug. 12, 2006
Sadly, you cannot ban people from commenting on your comics. And seeing as I always leave information on why the page is either good or bad, I am hurting noone. I really think you ought to be nicer to people who comment on your pages.
Rich at 7:17PM, Aug. 10, 2006
What the hell is this supposed to be?! The sprites are nearly impossible to make out, and the text is horrible!
Emerald at 4:57PM, July 25, 2006
lol Amy
Tundra at 4:28PM, July 25, 2006
erm. None of your comics make any sense.