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Pierrah on April 26, 2009
Um this page i dont like alot and i wante to do colour but i kinda suck at that.. I may do colour pages in the future. I hope you like the page, this is my frist time making a web comic. I fixed the page.. i made it smaller cos i thought it was a little too big lol.
tommym at 2:01PM, June 30, 2009
Dear Pierrah, Skyangel is the expert here on matters of art and style and alot of other stuff.As for me I go more for story and plot.It's early yet but so far you are doing well. Tommym
skyangel at 3:36AM, June 18, 2009
Just one thing: I think the panel with the letter in it looks kind of awkward blotting out her face like that. I think it would have looked nicer just as a sheet of paper on the desk; it would have been easier to draw too :)
skyangel at 3:33AM, June 18, 2009
The page looks just fine to me size-wise, and being as this is the first real page of the story I'm impressed with your art and layout, but importantly the story flows nicely, you tell it well and you've created a nice air of intrigue that makes me want to turn the page!! So don't be hard on yourself. The art is perfectly okay for now and you have a nice way of drawing your characters etc. If you keep at it, you will be amazed at how much you improve in just a few months.