awww come on it's not that bad. for one thing excellent panneling. and that eye is really good.
the only thing i will "suggest" is that it's okay to block out some of the art to make bigger word bubbles, you don't have to change mind you just a suggestion.
either way great start :)
~PV
Sketchy, incoherent, unreadable, AND reads right-to-left? You certainly need to improve kid. Might I suggest using larger panels or adding some sort of detail so we can tell what the hell is going on?
deleted-byrequest-03 at 5:56PM, Sept. 12, 2006
Sorry... but I can't read the words... it's too sloppy... -_-
pv_chan at 7:56PM, Aug. 28, 2006
awww come on it's not that bad. for one thing excellent panneling. and that eye is really good. the only thing i will "suggest" is that it's okay to block out some of the art to make bigger word bubbles, you don't have to change mind you just a suggestion. either way great start :) ~PV
Rich at 5:39PM, Aug. 28, 2006
Sketchy, incoherent, unreadable, AND reads right-to-left? You certainly need to improve kid. Might I suggest using larger panels or adding some sort of detail so we can tell what the hell is going on?