I don't think the switch from sniper rifle to shot gun is really that bad of a thing, since you can switch guns in the actual game anyways.
but the rest of everyone else said I agree with... especially the speech bubbles...
I like the idea but overall it's not very impresive. Here's why:
1. The sprites look really distorted what did you save it as PNG?
2. Your language mechanics are horrible. Use punctuation, and capitalization.
3. Spend a little more time on your bubbles. Fill in the tails, words should never touch the edge of the bubble. My guess is that your using MS Paint. Even in MS Paint there are ways to make this look better.
4. Keep track of the sprites you use. In pannel 3 the guy who looks like Master Chief is holding a sniper rifle in the rest he is holding a shotgun.
5. Your backgrounds look streched out, use the Strech/Skew option.
I don't normaly read sprite comics but if you can do a good job and work on it a little bit I may follow your story.
luclucluc at 9:30AM, April 13, 2007
I don't think the switch from sniper rifle to shot gun is really that bad of a thing, since you can switch guns in the actual game anyways. but the rest of everyone else said I agree with... especially the speech bubbles...
toadsworth262 at 10:05AM, April 12, 2007
okay...
Jaffa at 3:09PM, April 11, 2007
...and to add to shishno15 i believe the term is, "Die you sonS of bitches!" Not "die you son of a bitches!" just saying, but u know, not bad
shisno15 at 4:48PM, April 10, 2007
I like the idea but overall it's not very impresive. Here's why: 1. The sprites look really distorted what did you save it as PNG? 2. Your language mechanics are horrible. Use punctuation, and capitalization. 3. Spend a little more time on your bubbles. Fill in the tails, words should never touch the edge of the bubble. My guess is that your using MS Paint. Even in MS Paint there are ways to make this look better. 4. Keep track of the sprites you use. In pannel 3 the guy who looks like Master Chief is holding a sniper rifle in the rest he is holding a shotgun. 5. Your backgrounds look streched out, use the Strech/Skew option. I don't normaly read sprite comics but if you can do a good job and work on it a little bit I may follow your story.