becca9901 at 6:26PM, Feb. 5, 2008

Hay ca i have a cameo of your sprites please?

Egnio at 6:36PM, Sept. 13, 2006

Hello, this is my comic... Seen to death. Seriously, I stoped reading the comic after reading THAT. But the comic looks kind of fine.

Rich at 5:17PM, Sept. 13, 2006

Ok, I think I see some problems here. Fortunately, it's all stuff you can probably work out quickly. 1. The yellow outline is not really necessary. If you must use an outline, please use a more subdued color in the future. 2. The speech bubbles don't have tails leading to the characters. This is a big one cause ya gotta do your speech bubbles right in order for a comic to succeed. 3. Color coded font is really annoying. It implies emotion and makes it awkward to read. [color=red]Imagine[/color] [color=cyan]reading[/color] [color=violet]a[/color] [color=green]book[/color] [color=brown]and[/color] [color=orange]all[/color] [color=blue]the[/color] [color=yellow]words[/color] or [color=red]sentences[/color] [color=indigo]being[/color] [color=green]different[/color] [color=violet]colors...[/color] That's a little awkward to read, ain't it? 4. Breaking the fourth wall. If you absolutely MUST do this, then keep it to a dead minimum. The fourth wall is there for a reason. If every character knows they are in a comic, then the plot is cheapened up by this. It makes the world in the comic seem smaller and less interesting. The good? You realized that this is a comic and not a game screenshot. I can tell this by the fact that it is structured like a comic. Fix the flaws and keep comicking.