Ok, um... What is this comic really about dude? I don't understand it... So a widescreen TV is talking to your sonic character? I'm not saying the sonic character isn't good, it's better than what I can ever do. But you should follow these steps.
1. Are you free paneling already? If you are, you shouldn't rush it. Try to get some standard boxes dude. Yours is just all over the place.
2. Your sprites look weird.. All scraggly, and rushed. Take it one step at a time.
3. I think making a TV like some sort of powerful overlord is kinda weird. Get some actual backgrounds. If you are doing a sonic comic, www.themysticalforestzone.com is a good place to get it.
4. Get better text bubbles. Look here on DD for some tutorials. You need to practice these things.
That's all I can really say. Look out for the trolls here. They make it their lifelong dream to make you mad. Like they don't have anything else to do right?
Also, what program do you use? Download Paint.net onto your computer. It's free, and in ways, it's exactly like Photoshop. If your computer is old, stick with the program you're using already. But TRY and TRY to improve.
Hope you take all of this into account. Hope to see a better improvement next issue.
PKNESS at 7:12AM, Dec. 8, 2010
Ugh, motherfuker is an example of a troll.
motherfuker at 2:58PM, Dec. 7, 2010
Sonic fan characters are fucking awful.
PKNESS at 1:57PM, Dec. 7, 2010
Ok, um... What is this comic really about dude? I don't understand it... So a widescreen TV is talking to your sonic character? I'm not saying the sonic character isn't good, it's better than what I can ever do. But you should follow these steps. 1. Are you free paneling already? If you are, you shouldn't rush it. Try to get some standard boxes dude. Yours is just all over the place. 2. Your sprites look weird.. All scraggly, and rushed. Take it one step at a time. 3. I think making a TV like some sort of powerful overlord is kinda weird. Get some actual backgrounds. If you are doing a sonic comic, www.themysticalforestzone.com is a good place to get it. 4. Get better text bubbles. Look here on DD for some tutorials. You need to practice these things. That's all I can really say. Look out for the trolls here. They make it their lifelong dream to make you mad. Like they don't have anything else to do right? Also, what program do you use? Download Paint.net onto your computer. It's free, and in ways, it's exactly like Photoshop. If your computer is old, stick with the program you're using already. But TRY and TRY to improve. Hope you take all of this into account. Hope to see a better improvement next issue.