I agree with DJLInk, that was my main observation was that this one was really hard to read.
Otherwise, it appears you are getting the hang of the look of your characters. That's always a hard one to pull of consistently, but with time, it comes together. :)
Far as I could tell M is in the 15yo area in this sites rating system; "implied sex, mild voilence, no cursing". There's butt sex later on and some drug use, basically.
Uh yeah the text's kinda blurry, sorry. I'll just rewrite it on the computer in the other pages.
Druchii at 9:25AM, June 17, 2008
I agree with DJLInk, that was my main observation was that this one was really hard to read. Otherwise, it appears you are getting the hang of the look of your characters. That's always a hard one to pull of consistently, but with time, it comes together. :)
KiryaPd at 10:53PM, March 15, 2007
Far as I could tell M is in the 15yo area in this sites rating system; "implied sex, mild voilence, no cursing". There's butt sex later on and some drug use, basically. Uh yeah the text's kinda blurry, sorry. I'll just rewrite it on the computer in the other pages.
DJLink at 3:23PM, March 15, 2007
Dam couldnt read a thing they said oh just wondering why this is rated M?