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jasonspringer on March 20, 2006
I'm up for review in the forum please go and tell the mass what you think. The more feed back I get the better I become.
http://www.drunkduck.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1728
Jade Revolver
jasonspringer on March 20, 2006
I'm up for review in the forum please go and tell the mass what you think. The more feed back I get the better I become.
http://www.drunkduck.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1728
The mediocre one at 1:28PM, Sept. 3, 2006
very, very nice.
Joff at 2:27PM, April 6, 2006
Ha! That's gotta put a crimp in her plans
x3022 at 8:59PM, March 25, 2006
thanks for stopping by Robot Chuck, that led me here and to Jade Revolver. Great artwork and good dialogue, though sometimes the balloon placement seems a bit awkward (bottom panel on this strip, for example). And, correct me if I'm wrong here, but isn't the name of the comic mispelled in the copyright notice (its revolver, not revolover)? I'm faving the JR (however its spelled). Great start!
subcultured at 6:10AM, March 25, 2006
i thought he was overacting whe he said "my brain"
coinilius at 8:35PM, March 23, 2006
Hmmm, wonder what's going on here?
Hamorhage at 12:39PM, March 22, 2006
You need feedback? Well first of all I think ou know this page looks GOOD! I mean the characters look nice, I like the transition of panels and it's something MALE about this comic whic I cant resist. On teh other hand..between now and publication you have a few years to go. The movemenst and poses could be more real or charismatic. The coloring is good, but look at the backgrounds..the floor for example doesnt convince me. Often when you look at pro animation you see "almsot real" backgrounds witha nime characters. Your needs to develop yet, but for an online comic I'd say your WELL underway!
magicalmisfits at 8:43PM, March 21, 2006
Ha ha I wasn't worried. Much!