Chapter02 PG01
Zimeta on July 28, 2014
Same old routine for Otto. Still avoiding looking into the mirror too much.
I
just realized I probably should've shown him with stubble in the
morning at the beginning of these chapters. But hey, that's not really
something most girls think about.
Seems like Otto got pretty far fixing up that blue robot the previous night. Truly he is a master of robotics.
Now
that we've seen Otto's normal routine in the previous chapter, things
might just start happening to Otto in this chapter. You know how I don't
like to keep readers waiting longer than I have to!
Stig Hemmer at 1:47AM, Aug. 15, 2014
He has light hair. Stubble wouldn't be very visible.
Gunwallace at 7:04PM, July 29, 2014
The latest Quackcast, 177, has an unofficial theme tune for May the Rain Come. I'm so impressed with your output and your skill with lines and expressions. Really enjoying this one.