Page 2: issue 12 - Empty Spaces

shastab24 on Dec. 5, 2012

I'm putting together a crossover project for next year which will run through multiple comics and also try to benefit the Hero Initiative.  If you want to join in on the crossover fun, e-mail me at karamesser@hotmail.com or PQ me on this site.  You don't exactly have a deadline to sign up, but the sooner you do, the better you can guide your comic through the storyline and the more immediately you can get the cool crossovers set up.
 
Heroes Alliance is currently running chapter 7, which was written by myself.  It's over halfway done with its epic length and features a lot of great art.  Check it out here on Drunk Duck!
 
And check out Trans Dimensional Trans Superheroes, my new community project comic, also on Drunk Duck!
 
Onto the page at hand: I didn't realize how difficult it would be going into this issue to do the character dialogue and make it seem like them.  I realize I haven't exactly established them much.  I mean, one might be able to tell Astral and the Runner without the pictures above, but that's because of the way they talk.  But I'm trying to get it down.  And I'm trying to advance character interactions.  The Swimmer hitting on Eiderdown last issue led me to the interactions here.  I've also established Eiderdown being a bit less inhibited in physical interaction when drunk, and she was drinking last issue (and issue 4 established she can't hold her liquor), so this seemed inevitable.  It's informing that character interaction, but I want to see others and how they develop for me.