Ch. 4 - Goodbye Trespasser
jgib99 on April 10, 2016
Holy crap, its the end of the chapter already!?
I'm not used to getting these done so soon.
So this one ended on a serious downer. There doesn't seem to be any way for our heroine to escape this.
Chapter 5 will begin on May 2nd. I'm going to use the next couple of weeks to build more of a buffer and do a couple of other tiny tweeks. So it won't be a long wait.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'll see you on May 2 for the beginning of Chapter Five. Later Duckies!!
Banes at 8:25PM, May 29, 2016
Wow! Powerful ending! Frightening idea, losing everything like that.
jgib99 at 10:00PM, April 17, 2016
Whirlwynd - Its not looking good for Karen.
Whirlwynd at 5:08PM, April 16, 2016
That last panel is especially ominous O~O
jgib99 at 9:19AM, April 16, 2016
Peipei - These guys don't seem to be big fans of the comfy chair.
jgib99 at 8:50AM, April 16, 2016
El Cid - She's literally starting life anew.
Peipei at 9:57PM, April 14, 2016
That doesn't look comfortable! Nice way to end off the chapter, on a massive cliffhanger!
El Cid at 7:04PM, April 14, 2016
Don't be such a negative Nancy! Think of this as the first day of the rest of your life...
jgib99 at 4:54PM, April 14, 2016
Tupapayon - There's always side effects with things like this.
jgib99 at 4:31PM, April 14, 2016
KimLuster - Thanks!! Things certainly don't look good for Karen.
jgib99 at 4:27PM, April 14, 2016
Ghostrunner - LOL. 9-5 can definitely kill brain cells.
jgib99 at 4:24PM, April 14, 2016
Plymayer - She's picked a hell of a time to be a no-show.
jgib99 at 4:22PM, April 14, 2016
Jerrie - Yup. She's done for.
jgib99 at 4:20PM, April 14, 2016
Bravo - Thanks!!
tupapayon at 7:02AM, April 14, 2016
Yeah, but what about the side effects....
KimLuster at 6:36AM, April 14, 2016
Well... You've certainly created a great cliffhanger!! You're making me wonder if you've really done our heroine in...!! :D
ghostrunner at 6:12AM, April 14, 2016
welcome t the sensory deprivation chamber- or in laymans terms. 9-5
plymayer at 1:14AM, April 14, 2016
Holy Crap! Where the hell is that bitch Lassie when you need her to come to the rescue?
jerrie at 12:56AM, April 14, 2016
she's 100% screwed
bravo1102 at 12:44AM, April 14, 2016
Great fade out.