I like this one,
BUT I AM TOO PICKY TODAY!
[b]LESSON[/b]
How can he know that guy if he needs a hotel eh? If he knew him then he would have to live in the city somewhere, or live somewhere at all, OR have someplace to stay, like his friends house.
And if he had any of the above then he would have a place to stay.
UNLESS it is some extremely complicated matter that you could've explained.
[b]LESSON FINISHED[/b]
And I like the fact that you have one of the 6 Kirby centered comics on DD. I've got the one with the most pages, and you are the newest. Welcome aboard, you'll soon find it fun to warp kirby's personality to fit your comic. Oh wait, too late! Looking forward to future comics!
Easnic at 7:45AM, May 26, 2007
Update!
Nintendude at 7:19AM, June 30, 2006
I like the comic, Maybe change the brown colored bubbles. it might be hard to read it.
Zephyr_light at 4:44PM, June 8, 2006
Updates! ACK!
Angels at 6:47PM, June 6, 2006
I meant to do that
Rich at 1:25AM, June 6, 2006
AAAGH! Its SOOOO tiny!
Zephyr_light at 10:56PM, June 5, 2006
in the final panel. GOD I hate not bieng able to edit comments.
Zephyr_light at 3:40PM, June 5, 2006
And by the way, there is no tail connecting the text boxes to the characters.
Zephyr_light at 1:37AM, June 5, 2006
I like this one, BUT I AM TOO PICKY TODAY! [b]LESSON[/b] How can he know that guy if he needs a hotel eh? If he knew him then he would have to live in the city somewhere, or live somewhere at all, OR have someplace to stay, like his friends house. And if he had any of the above then he would have a place to stay. UNLESS it is some extremely complicated matter that you could've explained. [b]LESSON FINISHED[/b] And I like the fact that you have one of the 6 Kirby centered comics on DD. I've got the one with the most pages, and you are the newest. Welcome aboard, you'll soon find it fun to warp kirby's personality to fit your comic. Oh wait, too late! Looking forward to future comics!
josif at 1:03PM, June 4, 2006
id give you a five but its to small
Kol Kane at 12:24PM, June 4, 2006
Looks alright.