AmeliaP at 2:33PM, Aug. 16, 2017

Hmm, I'll try it :) I thought just putting tips like "excuse me my sons, King of Diamonds" and sort of a thing in the dialogue would be enough. It reminds me the bad lettering order comics had back then, I had to read multiple times the same dialogue to track who was who. Thanks again! Your feedback is always helpful!

fallopiancrusader at 2:13PM, Aug. 16, 2017

I think colored dialogue balloons can work well to differentiate the speakers, but I think the "ownership" of the balloons needs to be established first. Right now, there's no way to tell which color belongs to whom. Maybe if the round balloons with actual "tails" on them are colored? I fear that might get too colorful for your otherwise very constrained overall palette

AmeliaP at 12:59PM, Aug. 16, 2017

You got it! But King of Spades was the only one not ignoring her, when he said: "they are angry...". The dialogue in the yellow box is from King of Diamonds, the red one is for the Don and the blue box is for King of Spades. Hmm, I need an opinion. I'm not used to use of dialogue boxes and I noticed many comics use colors to differ the characters speaking. Do yo know another trick for this? I tried to find something, but, no joy.

AmeliaP at 11:46AM, Aug. 16, 2017

Hahaha! LOL They don't look, but they are pretty young, between 17 and 23 years old...

AmeliaP at 11:49AM, Aug. 16, 2017

Andy did that intentionally, knowing Cyrenna would catch the apple in the mid air, and hurting her wound... Unhappily, he isn't only a prick, he's worse than it.