The admins never give two shits. You click Report and they'll remove anything.
I guess being honest =/= insulting. So let me try licking your Balls while I crit.
*ahem*
i red ur comci and it was gud except some thin weren't like the jokes were pretty bad sometimes and the text oxes seem pretty awful along with the effects are nto good either!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aslo alot of the comics lack punctuation so it's really hard tot ell what emotions theyre feeling or when a sentence ends also they're is a lot of style mixing which is bad except when its good (that means when it's very subtle and doesnt hurt the eyes!!!!!!!!!!!) also sometimes the comic has a background which is good but when it doesn't especialy in the battel seens it can get confusing what happens but it can get peretty confusing (i think PH made shadow explode but im not sur but i remeber when he did that 2 me in Silent Hill LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1) but somtimes (alot of th time) the "story" is bad and doesn't make much sense and the jokes are relly unfunny (did I alrdy say that????!!!) like the shadow vs sauske fight i mean a few pages later and shadoww was fighting pyramid head and the fight between shadow and sauske wasn't concluded!!!!!!!!!!!! im also really confused how snake and young solid snake are in the same comci (mayeb it's a time PARADOX LOL!!!!!!!) also alot of times you don't give crdit to the custom sprites (like todakarters shyguy although I don't knw whys hes isnt he NINTNDO???????) also a lot of the custom made props are cunfsing when snake was hiding from the shyguy it took me lke 10 minutes to realize that was supposed to be a box (also i can win a tetris LOL) maybe you should go to the spriters resource fo backgroundS and good sprites???????????? why did you use the offical vectoman at the begining and then use ur bad 1? also the typos are a srs problm i know you say you cant fix them butt cant yu sue a spel checker?!?!?? but other than the things I mentioned, it's gud!
*ahem*
tl;dr Fix the layout of the comic, think out your jokes better (an easy way to do that is to browse the good comics of Drunkduck, sprite comics or not, and see how their humor works and what people enjoy), use custom sprites if you can't make your own, if no sprites exist for the character (i.e. Pyramid Head) either go to a spriting site that takes request, or write out the character. It's better to do that than have a horrible sprite. Use sprite styles that closely match each other (color wise, like 8-bit and 32-bit on the same page looks bad.) instead of the first sprites you find, or like (i.e. using Sonic Advance style instead of the Genesis sprites) usually you can tell what bittage his what by the system it's on. Fix your typos, they're are 10000 on the Internet. Seriously. Learn the difference between your (as in you own it, as in your comic) and you're (you are. like You're making a pretty bad comic.) Lose the Meme jokes (mankind ill needs a Savior like you etc) use backgrounds more, mainly in the fighting scenes. Also give credit where credit is due.
There. I tried to be less of an asshole and give actually crit. If you remove this one as well, you're just not willing to listen to reason.
Rags at 5:33AM, Nov. 30, 2009
The admins never give two shits. You click Report and they'll remove anything. I guess being honest =/= insulting. So let me try licking your Balls while I crit. *ahem* i red ur comci and it was gud except some thin weren't like the jokes were pretty bad sometimes and the text oxes seem pretty awful along with the effects are nto good either!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aslo alot of the comics lack punctuation so it's really hard tot ell what emotions theyre feeling or when a sentence ends also they're is a lot of style mixing which is bad except when its good (that means when it's very subtle and doesnt hurt the eyes!!!!!!!!!!!) also sometimes the comic has a background which is good but when it doesn't especialy in the battel seens it can get confusing what happens but it can get peretty confusing (i think PH made shadow explode but im not sur but i remeber when he did that 2 me in Silent Hill LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1) but somtimes (alot of th time) the "story" is bad and doesn't make much sense and the jokes are relly unfunny (did I alrdy say that????!!!) like the shadow vs sauske fight i mean a few pages later and shadoww was fighting pyramid head and the fight between shadow and sauske wasn't concluded!!!!!!!!!!!! im also really confused how snake and young solid snake are in the same comci (mayeb it's a time PARADOX LOL!!!!!!!) also alot of times you don't give crdit to the custom sprites (like todakarters shyguy although I don't knw whys hes isnt he NINTNDO???????) also a lot of the custom made props are cunfsing when snake was hiding from the shyguy it took me lke 10 minutes to realize that was supposed to be a box (also i can win a tetris LOL) maybe you should go to the spriters resource fo backgroundS and good sprites???????????? why did you use the offical vectoman at the begining and then use ur bad 1? also the typos are a srs problm i know you say you cant fix them butt cant yu sue a spel checker?!?!?? but other than the things I mentioned, it's gud! *ahem* tl;dr Fix the layout of the comic, think out your jokes better (an easy way to do that is to browse the good comics of Drunkduck, sprite comics or not, and see how their humor works and what people enjoy), use custom sprites if you can't make your own, if no sprites exist for the character (i.e. Pyramid Head) either go to a spriting site that takes request, or write out the character. It's better to do that than have a horrible sprite. Use sprite styles that closely match each other (color wise, like 8-bit and 32-bit on the same page looks bad.) instead of the first sprites you find, or like (i.e. using Sonic Advance style instead of the Genesis sprites) usually you can tell what bittage his what by the system it's on. Fix your typos, they're are 10000 on the Internet. Seriously. Learn the difference between your (as in you own it, as in your comic) and you're (you are. like You're making a pretty bad comic.) Lose the Meme jokes (mankind ill needs a Savior like you etc) use backgrounds more, mainly in the fighting scenes. Also give credit where credit is due. There. I tried to be less of an asshole and give actually crit. If you remove this one as well, you're just not willing to listen to reason.
zealotjohn at 2:34PM, Nov. 29, 2009
that wasnt crit that was just insults, and apparently the admins thought so too
Rags at 2:19AM, Nov. 28, 2009
I gave him Crit before but he had the comment removed.
zealotjohn at 8:11PM, Nov. 27, 2009
@rags:if you want criticism, don't say crap that is nothing but insensitive crap
Rags at 1:08AM, Nov. 23, 2009
If you can't take crit then you should make your comics public. Really.
Glandis at 8:25AM, Nov. 20, 2009
wtf did I do?
zealotjohn at 9:15AM, Nov. 18, 2009
or maybe an announcer who yells what happens
Jonko at 6:47AM, Nov. 18, 2009
It is a little hard to tell. Maybe try adding some lines onto the page?
Rags at 10:32PM, Nov. 17, 2009
*Any of these comics The structure, the "plot" the EVERYTHING makes this comic unenjoyable.
Shike at 10:19PM, Nov. 17, 2009
It is physically impossible to tell what happened here.