Ambush!
Drageraren on June 1, 2008
I got lazy and didn't do the attacks here. This one was one of the less tedious ones. It was shorter than I would've liked. But it introduced two new characters(one who hasn't been named yet), Jenii and the Anorith, and then it also introduced The Soul-Ridden, The Cursed, The Guardians and that'll open doors for new teams to join in.
Toppenzap at 12:28PM, Aug. 22, 2008
Try to make the panel/text combos similar sized, a tiny picture above a big block of text does not look good. Also, instead of having a really long boring script at the end just have two panels of similar images, and split the script in half. It makes it easier on the eyes. And bein lazy and skipping battles basically takes the most exciting parts out the comic and leaves the boring parts the only parts left.
anonymous at 10:29PM, June 4, 2008
My favorite part is how one the "pokemon" looks like it has tiny hands coming from the cheeks. Like some kind of freak of nature. My second favorite part was how you just spammed dialogue next to face boxes. It's like reading fanfiction more than a comic, yet somehow worse.
Ace95 at 8:18PM, June 2, 2008
Well I cant say its very good no problem with the sprite but the format bugs me a lot its hard to understand whats going on,try speech bubbles and a few more panels so we have a better understanding of whats going on.