LOLZ42: trains... Pt 3
Bocaj on Dec. 7, 2007
So this week is Hanuka, so to all my zero Jewish readers Happy Hanuka!
Also I spent a LONG time making that little button right above the author's notes, so go check it out. Later I'll probably make a funny little panel in their for no reason. (Currently I am not putting links to comics I like there, but maybe in the future.)
Also in this comic I tried out a lot of different art styles/techniques and want to know which you thought were successful.
Full crit please.
That is pretty much it if anyone knows I'm forgetting something just PQ me (I feel like I am forgetting something).
Bocaj at 8:44PM, Dec. 8, 2007
The last panel is really just a lack of a punchline. This joke is really note that funny, I had some ideas to make it funnier, but they fell through. I made this page almost solely for art experimentation.
TheMidge28 at 8:36PM, Dec. 8, 2007
I like the second panel but I didn't understand the last frame of Beta imagining the capitve with a top hat and monocle and didn't realize it to be a monocle until after reading crocty's comment...
therealtj at 4:33PM, Dec. 8, 2007
... I missed a couple I guess... (OO)
Jules at 12:11PM, Dec. 8, 2007
The shading is really good in this page and I like Beta's expression in the 2nd to last panel. The sketchy stlye in the 2nd panel is also good. Overall great page.
Bocaj at 11:55AM, Dec. 8, 2007
@tj: LOLZ33
therealtj at 7:37AM, Dec. 8, 2007
WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS ARM?!
Bocaj at 7:03AM, Dec. 8, 2007
If you are talking about LOLZ30 (Drew=Dead=No), in the author's notes I explained what that was.
crocty at 6:34AM, Dec. 8, 2007
I thought he died... Anyway, I like the first Beta3, but it should probably only be for big emotion shots, like just then! I'm not quite sure how putting his food in a monocle and top hat will make him richer... But I never can figure out ANYTHING with you! Happy Hanukkah Mr. Bocaj.