Not a good idea to call a goku sprite lucas...you should realy edit it first... plus everything dragon and lance said is good. but i will elaborate for you.
Background seems blurred:
Make sure your saving as PNG format
Resized badly:
Always use sketch and skew when resizing. Keep the figures in whole numbers...100, 200, 300
Text is hard to read:
You should never post before the text is readable, fix it then update.
Text box needs work:
where the tail and the box meet, it must be clear, delete that line. ifyou want some custom speech boxes, PQ me ;)
I was where you are not to long ago but i have learned. I could help you if you let me...im going to give this a 5 for effort and potential...dont let me down
SpennyJ at 6:59PM, Feb. 17, 2007
Not a good idea to call a goku sprite lucas...you should realy edit it first... plus everything dragon and lance said is good. but i will elaborate for you. Background seems blurred: Make sure your saving as PNG format Resized badly: Always use sketch and skew when resizing. Keep the figures in whole numbers...100, 200, 300 Text is hard to read: You should never post before the text is readable, fix it then update. Text box needs work: where the tail and the box meet, it must be clear, delete that line. ifyou want some custom speech boxes, PQ me ;) I was where you are not to long ago but i have learned. I could help you if you let me...im going to give this a 5 for effort and potential...dont let me down
DragonAndLance at 5:14PM, Feb. 17, 2007
Background seems blured. Gohan has white around him. It looks like its resized badly. Text is hard to read. Text boxs need work.
darkhamsterlord at 4:37PM, Feb. 17, 2007
not bad, but could use work on certain areas.
Krazysk8rs3 at 4:27PM, Feb. 17, 2007
Also note that, in the 6th pannel, i forgot the S on thats Sorry Please dont hurt me >_