oooh! horrible, we girls can be so horrible :P
You shouldnt change the page, and I of course dont know if you invite advice or not, but with an action like that, it might of been more effective if you had done it a different angle, one where the girl is falling towards us, and you can see the other sneaky girls behind her as she falls. =3
Still, a nice page anyway, your drawing style is lovely!
curlpop at 10:14AM, Dec. 27, 2007
Great art! Love the story so far!
theorah at 2:58AM, Dec. 27, 2007
oooh! horrible, we girls can be so horrible :P You shouldnt change the page, and I of course dont know if you invite advice or not, but with an action like that, it might of been more effective if you had done it a different angle, one where the girl is falling towards us, and you can see the other sneaky girls behind her as she falls. =3 Still, a nice page anyway, your drawing style is lovely!
Callister at 7:57PM, Dec. 26, 2007
I really like your style, very nice!
taradaga at 7:09PM, Dec. 26, 2007
Just found this comic - I am so fascinated by the plot! Keep up the good work.