Naruto Manga?

Lodukas on July 30, 2007

So now I'm planing on making a Naruto comic, I just wanna know how you think the first page look. You don't need to vote THIS comic (Lodukas Comic Art) just give me some kind of rating on the first page I made for my naruto comic.

By the by.. I know I havent updated my comics for awhile but be patient (those who read my comic) I'm working my butt off at home even though I'm on vacation.