This needs alot of work...
1.Save your comics in ".png" cause you quality isn't good.
2.Where the heck are the speech bubbles? Add speech bubbles
3. Your resizing is bad, you should use the stretch/skew option paint has. Then enlarge with multiples of 100.
4.Get better energy blast sprites. Goto the following...
http://www.spriters-resource.com/
www.themysticalforestzone.com/
5.Your story is going really fast buddy.
6. Why isn't there any real background, get some at bghq.com
7.Make sure when you paste a sprite, that you press transparent, so the white box isn't visible.
Good luck
sasha the hedgehog at 6:34AM, Jan. 4, 2010
Yeah, but other than that, its a great story! Don't stop!
mattboy115 at 8:18AM, Dec. 17, 2009
Here's another idea. Get GIMP!
xVegitox at 4:39PM, Sept. 8, 2009
This needs alot of work... 1.Save your comics in ".png" cause you quality isn't good. 2.Where the heck are the speech bubbles? Add speech bubbles 3. Your resizing is bad, you should use the stretch/skew option paint has. Then enlarge with multiples of 100. 4.Get better energy blast sprites. Goto the following... http://www.spriters-resource.com/ www.themysticalforestzone.com/ 5.Your story is going really fast buddy. 6. Why isn't there any real background, get some at bghq.com 7.Make sure when you paste a sprite, that you press transparent, so the white box isn't visible. Good luck