1. If you use the game font then you should probably use the game's textboxes, it doesn't look right as it
2. Make the text boxes closer to the size of the entire text(I.E- Put a 2 pixel barrier between border and text). More picky that advice
3. IMPROVE THE TEXTBOX ARROWS
4. New York and places from our time do not(to my knowledge, ask Zan to check) exist in the Rockman Future Timeline
5. Try and improve your grammer a little more, it's gotten better since the first version but could use a little work.
6. The re-done shading on the warning is a nice touch
7. Make the sprites look like they are speaking(More "me being picky" than a tip really)
8. Serpent was around during Ciel's life, so he'd be around during the current time most likely
Omegaguy at 2:20PM, April 19, 2007
AoR, I LURV your avi. And the text-bubble-tails suck. Nuts.
SpeedReemix at 12:35PM, April 19, 2007
I know there is no new york but you'll see somethng about them in some time.
The Angel of Ruin at 11:22AM, April 19, 2007
1. If you use the game font then you should probably use the game's textboxes, it doesn't look right as it 2. Make the text boxes closer to the size of the entire text(I.E- Put a 2 pixel barrier between border and text). More picky that advice 3. IMPROVE THE TEXTBOX ARROWS 4. New York and places from our time do not(to my knowledge, ask Zan to check) exist in the Rockman Future Timeline 5. Try and improve your grammer a little more, it's gotten better since the first version but could use a little work. 6. The re-done shading on the warning is a nice touch 7. Make the sprites look like they are speaking(More "me being picky" than a tip really) 8. Serpent was around during Ciel's life, so he'd be around during the current time most likely
SpeedReemix at 9:46AM, April 19, 2007
That Kid Yellow - Yes,I played and thanks for rating.