For the two sides maybe you should recolor their uniforms... And the title, "Resone" isn't a word... Did you mean "Reason"? And in the text, "Destiny repeats itself freinds". "Freinds"? You meant "Friends", right?
Can't really rate at the moment. But points deducted for spelling errors.
croxtonhas at 6:13AM, June 18, 2008
Keep at it!
anonymous at 2:24AM, May 15, 2007
For the two sides maybe you should recolor their uniforms... And the title, "Resone" isn't a word... Did you mean "Reason"? And in the text, "Destiny repeats itself freinds". "Freinds"? You meant "Friends", right? Can't really rate at the moment. But points deducted for spelling errors.
masterdx at 8:01PM, May 14, 2007
it's getting interesting!