You need to give the text boxes an outline, and improve your grammar and punctuation.
"Wow, good job Blondy, wanna cookie." doesn't make too much sense to me. Try reading the comic over before uploading it.
Also, the speech boxes are in an illogical order. They should start from the top left of the panel and go down and to the right.
MegaX at 11:17AM, April 14, 2007
Had to delete the 2nd part because of complications but the comic will start again soon.
MegaX at 6:58PM, April 12, 2007
Uhh okay ill work on that, sorry im not perfect.
Brinstar Depths at 5:55PM, April 12, 2007
You need to give the text boxes an outline, and improve your grammar and punctuation. "Wow, good job Blondy, wanna cookie." doesn't make too much sense to me. Try reading the comic over before uploading it. Also, the speech boxes are in an illogical order. They should start from the top left of the panel and go down and to the right.
MegaX at 11:19AM, April 12, 2007
Thnx guys, I will update with more stuff, sry for the kinda crappy beginning but it will get better
RoronoaZoro at 11:01AM, April 12, 2007
Nice and funny!
slimredninja at 10:25AM, April 12, 2007
nice looking comic you got here