Beautiful rendering and coloring. Though... I feel the start up is way too wordy and quiet for me to get into, Chapter 2 is much easier to get into, thus making it a better start up chapter. But it needs some content from chapter 1 as well to make it have depth, a remix of both chapters might create a more powerful intro to your story.
Keep up the beautiful work... each page is like an illustration. A lot of heart, you have my respect on that.
mayshing at 1:06PM, Jan. 17, 2009
Beautiful rendering and coloring. Though... I feel the start up is way too wordy and quiet for me to get into, Chapter 2 is much easier to get into, thus making it a better start up chapter. But it needs some content from chapter 1 as well to make it have depth, a remix of both chapters might create a more powerful intro to your story. Keep up the beautiful work... each page is like an illustration. A lot of heart, you have my respect on that.
Akki333 at 7:08AM, Jan. 5, 2009
I see trouble coming! If I may ask what kind of software do you use?
Sei at 11:54PM, Jan. 4, 2009
Beautiful lighting.