First of all, Metal Gear doesn't take place with sonic characters. In fact, there are plenty of Metal Gear sprites floating around on the net. Past this annoyance (which isn't going towards my score) the sprites are merely recolors (which is going towards my score).
The text bubbles look smooth enough, but the text size is inconsistent, and runs too close to the edges.
Another issue is that the comic is was too small. I cannot get any feel for the character's emotions as they are zoomed out on. Even if there were a level of emotion in this issue (I don't think there is) they're too small to see anything. Zoom in on your panels.
Presentation?
Well, you could have used those top panels to show their infiltration, and cut back to the colonel when he has something to say (like a real MG game). The shots of the city/base seem like an excuse to avoid showing how the characters get inside.
jordo666 at 12:50PM, Oct. 30, 2006
I like the type of style good job!
KomradeDave at 9:30AM, Oct. 30, 2006
Sonic Snake? Solid Sonic? The Les Sprites Terribles project? Clones of Big Sonic? Sonic Boss? Acrylic? Confusion Parel Triunfo!
lefarce at 9:25AM, Oct. 30, 2006
First of all, Metal Gear doesn't take place with sonic characters. In fact, there are plenty of Metal Gear sprites floating around on the net. Past this annoyance (which isn't going towards my score) the sprites are merely recolors (which is going towards my score). The text bubbles look smooth enough, but the text size is inconsistent, and runs too close to the edges. Another issue is that the comic is was too small. I cannot get any feel for the character's emotions as they are zoomed out on. Even if there were a level of emotion in this issue (I don't think there is) they're too small to see anything. Zoom in on your panels. Presentation? Well, you could have used those top panels to show their infiltration, and cut back to the colonel when he has something to say (like a real MG game). The shots of the city/base seem like an excuse to avoid showing how the characters get inside.