Prologue 01: the three wandering ones
NPC_Girl on April 17, 2006
hey guys! I've been meaning to update this but nothing i draws ever seems good. so i thought i'd do a painting. just to start this comic off. whether it'll be used in the book i dunno. it's just a way to brief, brief the prologue. anyways this is done in watercolours. the poem itself is more or less a metaphor for the prologue which I'm gona have to try ever so horribly hard to brief. it'll all make sense when i get around to it… if i get around to it. i have exams coming up with quite allot of coarse work. so any work on the comic itself NPC or NPC redone will be a slow progress. though i half of the normal NPC all drawn out just need to do the second half. I'd have it finished and all if my computer didn't like sucking so unbelievingly!
anyways as for the watercolour piece… well drawing cities is hard, so that came out rather well considering i have very little practice upon it. as for the person… well it's defiantly an elf I'm giving you that!
NPC_Girl at 7:56AM, April 19, 2006
i try and read poetry but i relaly have very little interest in reading it and very little skill in writing it. better news though not concerning my crazy rant. i've now got all of the prologue sketched out on paper ready for inking. i think it's like five pages long. i'll get around to that sometime... but now that i've got all those sorted this should start updating. let's hope i get bored during lunch tommorow and draw out all of chapter 1 or something.
Krensada at 1:13PM, April 18, 2006
Well I read it and i may have to say that Some times the Sylibic rhythim of your poem doesn't flow too well. The art is good and the story sounds mysterious. So with that said i look forward to seeing more.
NPC_Girl at 12:24PM, April 18, 2006
wow, am i the only one who finds that comment a tiny little bit snobbish? awww i'm sowwy, is the text too long for you? do you want me to make the page longer or something and put them into tiny little verses so it just seems smaller? or do you want me to draw it in panels with different pictures. cause we all know pwitty wittle pictures makes things look so much interesting now don't we now? serously, it's not that long! it's a freaking poem, i don't exspect people to read it! i don't freaking read poems that come up in web comics. i mean most are damn boring as hell. i just wanted to make sure people didn't think the comic had died or something. i mean i don't have to write funny crap for people's amusement! i can do stuff more traditionally, i can write deep and emotional poetry too! okay well i can write crappy poetry but that's besides the point. if anyone thinks that they will relaly make very much of a point by saying how needlyessly pointless this page is and how there is too much text. go eat an apple or something because it would really be a better use of your time.
lothar at 11:46AM, April 18, 2006
Thats WAY too much text !!!!! most people will not read that, sure you will get somebody sayin that i am wrong , but chances are most people will neither read this nor leave a comment to tell you that they didnt read it ,