Oriru at 6:14AM, June 17, 2008

As poonipoonz says. Also, you should plan out the next page. Special effects and such stuff and also the plot advancement, at this far I have seen nothing else than just fighting for no reason between random persons. Also giving some time to think thru the jokes "If they are actually funny or not" will attract more readers.

kiddi at 3:54AM, June 17, 2008

nice

poonipoonz at 8:08PM, June 16, 2008

You shouldn't update so much... You run into a writers block... :P